Monday 27 June 2016

My Speech

Today I did my speech on fishing in front of the class. Please leave me a comment as I would love some feedback.



3 comments:

  1. Hi Xavier it's Tess from Paroa school
    Good job on your speech it is very good
    i like what you chose to do your speech about however the way you recorded it made the sound quite dull
    check out my blog tessb@blogspot.colm

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  2. Hi Xavier it's Jordan
    good speech maybe next time look at you audience but i was good:)

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  3. hi Xavier good speech but next time can you use more volume and try to keep the camera straight.

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