Thursday, 19 March 2015

RED!!!!!!

Red is the feel of  Blood dripping off my face

 Red is the colour of the roses

 Red tastes like the juicy strawberry's

 Red is the smell of my drink.
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  1. Riki RM 18 Te Mata School2 June 2015 at 11:43

    Hi Xavier. Really good descriptive writing. Red reminds me of strawberries.

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  2. Anonymous25 August 2016 at 14:19

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    http://paroagreymatthewm.blogspot.co.nz/

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