Thursday 19 March 2015

RED!!!!!!

Red is the feel of  Blood dripping off my face

 Red is the colour of the roses

 Red tastes like the juicy strawberry's

 Red is the smell of my drink.
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  1. Unknown1 April 2015 at 09:55

    hi zav what a good poem well done

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  2. Unknown1 April 2015 at 10:11

    cool poem, I like the part when you said red is the felling of of blood dripping down your face

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  3. Unknown15 May 2015 at 10:09

    Hi Xavier Really cool red reminds me of stewberry.

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  4. Unknown15 May 2015 at 10:12

    good post Xavier. red is definitely the taste of strawberry's.

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  5. Riki RM 18 Te Mata School2 June 2015 at 11:43

    Hi Xavier. Really good descriptive writing. Red reminds me of strawberries.

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  6. Unknown14 August 2015 at 10:44

    WHAT dose Red tell me ? red tell me rosies

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  7. Unknown10 September 2015 at 16:17

    Hi Xavier
    I like your blog post it is cool what does red tell me?
    It tells me About the inside of an watermelon

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  8. Unknown13 September 2015 at 17:20

    Hi Xavier
    I like this story. I like how you used good describing words like red is the feel of blood dripping of my face. What does red remind you of mostly? It reminds me of when you stubble over your shoelace and blood comes wishing out.
    Ella

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  9. Anonymous25 August 2016 at 14:19

    hi Xavier this is a really good poem check out my blog

    http://paroagreymatthewm.blogspot.co.nz/

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