Greymouth, New Zealand
hi zav what a good poem well done
cool poem, I like the part when you said red is the felling of of blood dripping down your face
Hi Xavier Really cool red reminds me of stewberry.
good post Xavier. red is definitely the taste of strawberry's.
Hi Xavier. Really good descriptive writing. Red reminds me of strawberries.
WHAT dose Red tell me ? red tell me rosies
Hi Xavier I like your blog post it is cool what does red tell me?It tells me About the inside of an watermelon
Hi Xavier I like this story. I like how you used good describing words like red is the feel of blood dripping of my face. What does red remind you of mostly? It reminds me of when you stubble over your shoelace and blood comes wishing out.Ella
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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
hi zav what a good poem well done
ReplyDeletecool poem, I like the part when you said red is the felling of of blood dripping down your face
ReplyDeleteHi Xavier Really cool red reminds me of stewberry.
ReplyDeletegood post Xavier. red is definitely the taste of strawberry's.
ReplyDeleteHi Xavier. Really good descriptive writing. Red reminds me of strawberries.
ReplyDeleteWHAT dose Red tell me ? red tell me rosies
ReplyDeleteHi Xavier
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post it is cool what does red tell me?
It tells me About the inside of an watermelon
Hi Xavier
ReplyDeleteI like this story. I like how you used good describing words like red is the feel of blood dripping of my face. What does red remind you of mostly? It reminds me of when you stubble over your shoelace and blood comes wishing out.
Ella
hi Xavier this is a really good poem check out my blog
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